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Drivers Foreplay: A Poem

Hands greasy of money

Palms sweaty of green cash

Yet ninoy brings smile all the time

Almost drooling in sight

Of wadded bills folded in a band

A palm ready to grab while his eyes alight

Boastful, knowing traffic police

In the city of drivers streets



Smoke keeps coming and going daily

While he coughs with agony

Hey bossingg!

He yells all the time to greet such great man

Roast pig making his belly big

They smile and wave, praising

His president hooks him up

While his family eats fish and scraps



Everyday he tries to roam the route in heat

Beating other competition of the driving seats

Yelling when coming, hailing when going

Still they bring smile whenever they see their president, the man

Being a friend would bring charm untouched by no one

Except his friend would give fines whenever they are no longer fine

Paying 1500 pesos to belong to such group

200 pesos for an accident when he could no longer walk

Yet they smile for they will have a friend

Who would let them eat pig and drink beer in the christmas time

From that membership cash they have sweated off their backs.





feedback would be greatly appreciated

Re: Drivers Foreplay: A Poem

Very nice. You should write something for tristancafe's front page.

Re: Drivers Foreplay: A Poem


hi jd... why dont you try to send this to poetry.com

you write very well...im hoping to read more from you..

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Hands greasy of money

Palms sweaty of green cash

Yet ninoy brings smile all the time

Almost drooling in sight

Of wadded bills folded in a band

A palm ready to grab while his eyes alight

Boastful, knowing traffic police

In the city of drivers streets



Smoke keeps coming and going daily

While he coughs with agony

Hey bossingg!

He yells all the time to greet such great man

Roast pig making his belly big

They smile and wave, praising

His president hooks him up

While his family eats fish and scraps



Everyday he tries to roam the route in heat

Beating other competition of the driving seats

Yelling when coming, hailing when going

Still they bring smile whenever they see their president, the man

Being a friend would bring charm untouched by no one

Except his friend would give fines whenever they are no longer fine

Paying 1500 pesos to belong to such group

200 pesos for an accident when he could no longer walk

Yet they smile for they will have a friend

Who would let them eat pig and drink beer in the christmas time

From that membership cash they have sweated off their backs.





feedback would be greatly appreciated

Re: Drivers Foreplay: A Poem


hi! jd, may i request you to write something related to coffee..

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Hands greasy of money

Palms sweaty of green cash

Yet ninoy brings smile all the time

Almost drooling in sight

Of wadded bills folded in a band

A palm ready to grab while his eyes alight

Boastful, knowing traffic police

In the city of drivers streets



Smoke keeps coming and going daily

While he coughs with agony

Hey bossingg!

He yells all the time to greet such great man

Roast pig making his belly big

They smile and wave, praising

His president hooks him up

While his family eats fish and scraps



Everyday he tries to roam the route in heat

Beating other competition of the driving seats

Yelling when coming, hailing when going

Still they bring smile whenever they see their president, the man

Being a friend would bring charm untouched by no one

Except his friend would give fines whenever they are no longer fine

Paying 1500 pesos to belong to such group

200 pesos for an accident when he could no longer walk

Yet they smile for they will have a friend

Who would let them eat pig and drink beer in the christmas time

From that membership cash they have sweated off their backs.





feedback would be greatly appreciated