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"i want..." - " I don't want..." -sorry i just had to get this off my back

I don't want to think about you anymore....

I don't want to know how you're doing......

I don't want to reminisce about how good it felt to be with you....

I don't want to think about our fun conversations....

I don't want to torture myself with thoughts of you....

I don't want to confuse myself anymore......

I don't want to know where I stand.....

I don't want to know if we really connected on a different level.....

I don't want to wonder if you'll get in touch with me when you come back.....

I don't want to wonder when you'll be back....

I don't want you to be the first thing in my mind when I wake up....

and I DON'T WANT TO MISS YOU ANYMORE!!!



I want my mind to be free from thoughts of you...

I want to accept that there will never be "us"......

I want to wake up from this foolishness.....

I want to forget about you once and for all....

I WANT TO NOT WANT YOU ANYMORE.......



I want to know why you had such an impact on me....

I want to know what you said to me that made me feel so much for you......or maybe it's the unspoken words

I want to know why I can't forget the look you gave me the last time we saw each other..........

I want to know if that look really meant anything at all......



I WANT TO KNOW WHY I CAN'T STOP THIS MADNESS!!!!!!



I want to know when I'll stop wanting and wondering and thinking about these stupid thoughts.....



maybe if I'm lucky I can let go today

or maybe tomorrow...........!







Re: "i want..." - " I don't want..." -sorry i just had to get this off my back


Galing naman...I really like your poem, I think it's quite well-written. It rings so true...sounds like there's an interesting story behind that poem...



I've been through that "stage" too (in what now seems like a very distant past), it was harrowing to go through all that but, cliche as this may sound, I did learn so many things and came out of the whole experience a better person. In short, I grew up. (Some people would say that I didn't grow up enough, but that's another story.) And looking back, natatatawa na lang ako sa sarili sa mga pinag-gagagawa ko nung mga panahong yun...



Stay strong and cool, girl. Kudos again.

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I don't want to think about you anymore....

I don't want to know how you're doing......

I don't want to reminisce about how good it felt to be with you....

I don't want to think about our fun conversations....

I don't want to torture myself with thoughts of you....

I don't want to confuse myself anymore......

I don't want to know where I stand.....

I don't want to know if we really connected on a different level.....

I don't want to wonder if you'll get in touch with me when you come back.....

I don't want to wonder when you'll be back....

I don't want you to be the first thing in my mind when I wake up....

and I DON'T WANT TO MISS YOU ANYMORE!!!



I want my mind to be free from thoughts of you...

I want to accept that there will never be "us"......

I want to wake up from this foolishness.....

I want to forget about you once and for all....

I WANT TO NOT WANT YOU ANYMORE.......



I want to know why you had such an impact on me....

I want to know what you said to me that made me feel so much for you......or maybe it's the unspoken words

I want to know why I can't forget the look you gave me the last time we saw each other..........

I want to know if that look really meant anything at all......



I WANT TO KNOW WHY I CAN'T STOP THIS MADNESS!!!!!!



I want to know when I'll stop wanting and wondering and thinking about these stupid thoughts.....



maybe if I'm lucky I can let go today

or maybe tomorrow...........!







Re: Re: "i want..." - " I don't want..." -sorry i just had to get this off my back


thanks! really appreciate it, my first time writing anything like that, di ko alam kung pano ko nasulat yan, i guess my feeling were really intense,

but like you said when i look back at this matatawa din ako sa sarili ko im sure....hehehe! (ngayon pa lang)and i think if we don't get hurt we won't learn and next time when a situation like that comes along we'll be smarter about how to control our emotions,

yan drama na naman ako....hehheh but thanks again....

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Galing naman...I really like your poem, I think it's quite well-written. It rings so true...sounds like there's an interesting story behind that poem...



I've been through that "stage" too (in what now seems like a very distant past), it was harrowing to go through all that but, cliche as this may sound, I did learn so many things and came out of the whole experience a better person. In short, I grew up. (Some people would say that I didn't grow up enough, but that's another story.) And looking back, natatatawa na lang ako sa sarili sa mga pinag-gagagawa ko nung mga panahong yun...



Stay strong and cool, girl. Kudos again.

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I don't want to think about you anymore....

I don't want to know how you're doing......

I don't want to reminisce about how good it felt to be with you....

I don't want to think about our fun conversations....

I don't want to torture myself with thoughts of you....

I don't want to confuse myself anymore......

I don't want to know where I stand.....

I don't want to know if we really connected on a different level.....

I don't want to wonder if you'll get in touch with me when you come back.....

I don't want to wonder when you'll be back....

I don't want you to be the first thing in my mind when I wake up....

and I DON'T WANT TO MISS YOU ANYMORE!!!



I want my mind to be free from thoughts of you...

I want to accept that there will never be "us"......

I want to wake up from this foolishness.....

I want to forget about you once and for all....

I WANT TO NOT WANT YOU ANYMORE.......



I want to know why you had such an impact on me....

I want to know what you said to me that made me feel so much for you......or maybe it's the unspoken words

I want to know why I can't forget the look you gave me the last time we saw each other..........

I want to know if that look really meant anything at all......



I WANT TO KNOW WHY I CAN'T STOP THIS MADNESS!!!!!!



I want to know when I'll stop wanting and wondering and thinking about these stupid thoughts.....



maybe if I'm lucky I can let go today

or maybe tomorrow...........!







Re: "i want..." - " I don't want..." -sorry i just had to get this off my back

i emphatize with what you are going through.. i have been there.. and u can let go, given time... or you can ask someone to help you get over it