i came upon this website accident while searching for some contemporary fil poetry. anyway, its interesting that you have a venue for poets...reading some of the works is an additional pleasure for the virtual tour...



i dont mean to be rude but...shouldn't the first line of this poem be or have been: take over me....instead of take me over? if you mean take control of....well...just suggesting

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take me over,

control how i feel,

mould me into perfect soul.

let me breath your air,

see your wrold,

hear your voice,

crawl inside.



let me dig my grave,

buried deep in your life,

drown in your every emotion,

embed myself in your dreams.

let me absorb your every word,

let me consume your every thought,

let me seduce your every desire,

let me be with you.