Contribute your poetic masterpieces here. Anything and everything is welcome, including clumsy poems that you wrote during first-year high school. Also, feel free to post comments about the other poems that were submitted here.
I still remember… The day you came up to me and said “hi” Our first conversation, our first good-bye I still remember… The day I saw you in a different light Such a wondrous, beautiful, and angelic sight I still remember… The day I first held your hand The day our eyes met, as we could feel something more I still remember… The day I held you in my arms The day that I truly felt where I belonged I still remember… The day that both our lips met As I embraced you close and felt the joy of being loved I still remember… The day you whispered words into my ear You said that you loved me and that you were sincere I still remember… The day you first left when I couldn’t stand being alone Not knowing exactly when you’d come home I still remember… The day I saw you with someone new The pain was so great, but I still loved you I still remember… The day I had to try and let go Of all of the memories through which my pain showed Yet, I will never let go of the fact that I love you because… I still remember.
your poem is very touching...i like it very much..its wicked!keep up the good work....
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