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Re: "Pang-Hallmark" poems


HOW CAN I



HOW CAN I KEEP YOU

IF SOMEBODY OWNS YOU

HOW CAN I GO TO YOUR WAY

IF SOMEONE IS BLOCKING

HOW CAN I HOLD YOU

IF SOMEONE IS HOLDING YOU

HOW CAN I BE SPECIAL FOR YOU

IF THERE IS SOMEBODY FOR YOU

HOW CAN I SAY GOOD-BYE TO YOU

IF I DON"T WANNA LEAVE YOU

HOW CAN I SAY I DON"T LOVE YOU ANYMORE

IF MY HEART KEEP SAYS I LOVE YOU

...PERHAPS FOR YOU IS NOTHING BUT, FOR ME

IS EVERYTHING

...I FORCE MY SELF TO FORGET YOU BUT, IT

DOESN"T FOLLOW CAUSE ...

THE MORE I TRY TO FORGET YOU

THE MORE MY HEART SAYS...

I LOVE YOU

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Replying to:

Do you guys have any poems na pwedeng "pang-Hallmark greeting card" and dating? Maybe stuff you wrote way back in highschool, or nung time na in-love na in-love ka? Post them here!

Re: Re: "Pang-Hallmark" poems


nice poem. i like it. keep up the good work..

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HOW CAN I



HOW CAN I KEEP YOU

IF SOMEBODY OWNS YOU

HOW CAN I GO TO YOUR WAY

IF SOMEONE IS BLOCKING

HOW CAN I HOLD YOU

IF SOMEONE IS HOLDING YOU

HOW CAN I BE SPECIAL FOR YOU

IF THERE IS SOMEBODY FOR YOU

HOW CAN I SAY GOOD-BYE TO YOU

IF I DON"T WANNA LEAVE YOU

HOW CAN I SAY I DON"T LOVE YOU ANYMORE

IF MY HEART KEEP SAYS I LOVE YOU

...PERHAPS FOR YOU IS NOTHING BUT, FOR ME

IS EVERYTHING

...I FORCE MY SELF TO FORGET YOU BUT, IT

DOESN"T FOLLOW CAUSE ...

THE MORE I TRY TO FORGET YOU

THE MORE MY HEART SAYS...

I LOVE YOU

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Do you guys have any poems na pwedeng "pang-Hallmark greeting card" and dating? Maybe stuff you wrote way back in highschool, or nung time na in-love na in-love ka? Post them here!

Re: "Pang-Hallmark" poems


This one is really an anti-Hallmark poem, a la Charles Manson. Here goes...





When You Said Goodbye



bring in the funeral drum.

tonight i bury this fool,

this trifle, this rapture

for niceness.



i beat this drum for blood

for drops of salt to mix

with shreds of my viscera

cut by dagger corners of your smile.



this soup to lubricate all

the violations i intend

with all the vileness

i could dredge.



and from all the cankers

that result from this

i shall build a mound,

overlay it



with plucked eyebrows

and pieces of my scrotum.

with choicest fat

from your loveliness

i shall burn the pile



and feed on its ashes

for years to come.





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I hope that doesn't freak out anyone. But I think this conveys a certain range of emotions that one might go through when love goes bad. 'Happens to most of us.



Anyway, pop the cork and pass the Cristal! Happy New Year to everyone!



Cheers!

JP






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Replying to:

Do you guys have any poems na pwedeng "pang-Hallmark greeting card" and dating? Maybe stuff you wrote way back in highschool, or nung time na in-love na in-love ka? Post them here!

Re: Re: "Pang-Hallmark" poems


Wow, intense. I hope I'll never ever become your enemy, hehehe. Seriously though, nice poem, very...uhm, graphic yung imagery. But I guess some cruel heartbreaks can bring about that kind of bitterness.



Pero I have a "counter-poem" for that, (it's actually something by THE Lea Salonga):



Be not fearful of the pain

One finds when one loves...

Of the sleepless nights and

tearful days...

For it is rare that the chance to love,

And love deeply

Comes your way...

When it does, take it and fall,

Whatever the risk.



O diba?

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Replying to:


This one is really an anti-Hallmark poem, a la Charles Manson. Here goes...





When You Said Goodbye



bring in the funeral drum.

tonight i bury this fool,

this trifle, this rapture

for niceness.



i beat this drum for blood

for drops of salt to mix

with shreds of my viscera

cut by dagger corners of your smile.



this soup to lubricate all

the violations i intend

with all the vileness

i could dredge.



and from all the cankers

that result from this

i shall build a mound,

overlay it



with plucked eyebrows

and pieces of my scrotum.

with choicest fat

from your loveliness

i shall burn the pile



and feed on its ashes

for years to come.





*******************

I hope that doesn't freak out anyone. But I think this conveys a certain range of emotions that one might go through when love goes bad. 'Happens to most of us.



Anyway, pop the cork and pass the Cristal! Happy New Year to everyone!



Cheers!

JP






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Replying to:

Do you guys have any poems na pwedeng "pang-Hallmark greeting card" and dating? Maybe stuff you wrote way back in highschool, or nung time na in-love na in-love ka? Post them here!

Re: Re: Re: "Pang-Hallmark" poems


Touche, Tristan, touche.

But you did mention something about bringing out our high school material, right?



Anyway, peeps, keep on truckin'.



JP

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Replying to:


Wow, intense. I hope I'll never ever become your enemy, hehehe. Seriously though, nice poem, very...uhm, graphic yung imagery. But I guess some cruel heartbreaks can bring about that kind of bitterness.



Pero I have a "counter-poem" for that, (it's actually something by THE Lea Salonga):



Be not fearful of the pain

One finds when one loves...

Of the sleepless nights and

tearful days...

For it is rare that the chance to love,

And love deeply

Comes your way...

When it does, take it and fall,

Whatever the risk.



O diba?

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Replying to:


This one is really an anti-Hallmark poem, a la Charles Manson. Here goes...





When You Said Goodbye



bring in the funeral drum.

tonight i bury this fool,

this trifle, this rapture

for niceness.



i beat this drum for blood

for drops of salt to mix

with shreds of my viscera

cut by dagger corners of your smile.



this soup to lubricate all

the violations i intend

with all the vileness

i could dredge.



and from all the cankers

that result from this

i shall build a mound,

overlay it



with plucked eyebrows

and pieces of my scrotum.

with choicest fat

from your loveliness

i shall burn the pile



and feed on its ashes

for years to come.





*******************

I hope that doesn't freak out anyone. But I think this conveys a certain range of emotions that one might go through when love goes bad. 'Happens to most of us.



Anyway, pop the cork and pass the Cristal! Happy New Year to everyone!



Cheers!

JP






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Replying to:

Do you guys have any poems na pwedeng "pang-Hallmark greeting card" and dating? Maybe stuff you wrote way back in highschool, or nung time na in-love na in-love ka? Post them here!