Well, I finished the little mini-quest after being intrigued by the premise of this "MMO" for the past few days, and I honestly have to say that I'm a bit disappointed.

I can already tell just from that snippet, that maybe you should recruit a proofreader to check your descriptions and dialogue; typoes such as "artefact" and "monoleth" are rather glaring in what amounts to a graphical Zork game.
Also, perhaps you could somehow disable the Tab key's function of locating hyperlinks? That was a problem with Crimson Room, too, and it takes out some of the challenge. Still, an A for effort, and this -is- just a "beta".