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titch k


IP: 203.45.255.230

Sep 1, 04 - 6:57 PM
A Guest On Earth

So, that was yesterday!
Did the sun fail
to wake you?
Did Eros, miss
it's chance, to say
'I love you'?
Where are your ears,
if not hearing
Listen to new dawn
as it arrives, with
unquestionable answers
A chorus, dew kissed,
singing, in search of life
This heartache,perishable,
thickening a quicksand
Sinking the bravest
found resting on laurels
Ever consumed insane
defiant of daylight's prowess
The owl, lost in darkness
eyes blinded, cannot see,
to unveil the mystery of light
Shake your booty, yawn
you are with colour
Found to be nursing fetter,
a fouling of the mind
Holding quest, for survival
Free-hearted, simply
a guest on Earth !

Titch
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Bonnie

www.poetrypoem.com/kay328

IP: 64.12.116.69

Sep 2nd, 2004 - 12:49 PM
Re: A Guest On Earth

Quote;So, that was yesterday!
Did the sun fail
to wake you?
Did Eros, miss
it's chance, to say
'I love you'?
*****
This part of the poem caught me. What a great start to an emtional catching poem.


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